1.     I really liked how you made it very clear and easy for me to follow the timeline and how your reading and writing developed.

2.     I feel like the paper is about how reading and writing played roles in your life and how you grew as a reader and writer throughout your schooling. The paper did a very good job addressing the prompt. I feel that it almost completely fulfills the assignment requirements.

3.     I think the paper could use a little more in how you will use reading and writing in your career.

4.     I choose the first bullet point.

5.     I feel like the essay was really well written.  The only thing I would suggest changing is adding a little bit more in the conclusion of how else you plan on reading and writing helping you in the future.

1.     Your paper really showed me how these books, films and tv shows influenced you as a reader and writer.

2.     I feel like this paper was written to tell the reader how these books and shows affected your reading and writing.  I feel like you did a good job hitting all of the main points in the prompt.

 3     I feel like you could take a little bit of the explaining of the show and put in a little bit more of how it made you read and write the way you do.

4.     I choose bullet number one.

5. The essay did a good job showing us how these books and shows affected your reading and writing.  You could use a little bit more on the specific ways it affected you and maybe add a little bit on how you plan on using reading and writing in the future. But other than that it was a good essay.